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CoA Spring '06
Thursday, 25/05/2006
Semester Concludes May 24
Wednesday was the end of the semester for all Sabir English classes. It was a privilege meeting all of you and I want to wish you much success!

The presentations this week were outstanding: Roy's Coral Lee Brown, Steve's Rev. Cecil Williams, Hui Peng's, Richard's, Machelle and Jesus', Miyoshi's, Alex's, Nurallah's, Donna and Arjun's, Tilla's and others. The team presentations were a pleasant surprise.

It was nice when students from other classes came by to sit in on another classes' presentations too.

Some of the writing for the research essay was also noteworthy, like Walter's, Helen's, Yu Chi's.

I apologize for giving you too much writing this semester; it's no wonder you were swamped. All I can say is I was over zealous, but your writing definitely showed improvement from early essays to later ones. Don't forget to read widely this summer and practice reading aloud, it really helps your writing. Read aloud to someone, and don't forget to look those words up you can't pronounce, ask a person who knows, or call the public library. Keep the phone number handy, next to your desk.

When the semester began I wasn't certain if I could navigate the terrain toting 17 units, plus working on a special project for the fall. Thanks for bearing with my foibles. I appreciate your understanding...I know I wasn't always coherent.

But we made it. The last final, Wednesday night, was at a restaurant in the Fruitvale; we shared a meal and talked about the semester. The weekly English class at this point was down to five, so we'd all heard the research essays read aloud more than once, so there was no need to present.

One member of the English 1A class lost her dad this week; she came to class Wednesday afternoon anyway to turn in her portfolio. I am amazed at how seriously students take their work. We want to offer her our condolescences.

Another student told a classmate she was dropping the class. That deadline passed almost a month ago. Other students didn't show for the final, or call. That was strange. Some students, dispite what I told them 18 weeks ago, lost their graded assignments, so they have no proof to support a passing grade. My grades are due Friday. Most of you know whether or not if you are passing, but if you want assurances: Call me or e-mail me: (510) 748-2131 or wanda_sabir@yahoo.com.

Don't forget to contact me between May 30-June 16, to arrange a time to pick up your portfolio.
I'll probably see many of you around this fall, some as soon as next week during Intersession.

Peace and Blessings
Wanda Sabir


Posted by englishcoa at 2:23 AM PDT
Updated: Thursday, 25/05/2006 2:24 AM PDT
Tuesday, 16/05/2006
May 15-19
There's no school Friday, May 19. It's Malcolm X Birthday observance in the Peralta College District. Do something revolutionary today...study for your exams next week. Check your syllabus to see when we meet. English 201 10-11, our exam is on Monday, May 22. The day of the final you will present your research essays. If you have any questions please ask in advance. Practice your presentation before class and time yourself. You cannot read your essay. Keep the presentations to 5-10 minutes, 15 max.

Portfolios (All)
Print the check-list on a sheet of paper and list your grades next to the assignments. The check-list is your table of contents.

In a soft-binder please include the following:
Name
Mailing Address
Course Number
E-mail address

1. Introduction: The introduction should discuss your past 18 weeks of study. Include your expectations and whether or not they were met. Compare and contrast your writing then and now with specific examples of how you have improved. Talk about what you have learned that has affected your attitude towards reading and writing, plus skills you plan to incorporate into your lifelong pursuit of learning (250-500 words).

2. Chose 2 essays (include all your drafts and peer reviews)that reflect your writing ability and discuss their merits from the perspective of a reader and a writer, also discuss your revision process (250-500 words. Do not compile the two essays.)

English 201 include all of your WWT Essays; plus your chapter essays for Narration, Examples, Description, Compare Contrast, Process, etc., plus your responses to chapter questions and/or narrative responses.

English 1A include your DIJ essays (10-12).

Both Classes: Midterm or Crash essays, Love essay

English 201: Emmitt Till Essay, Civil Rights Movement Essays, Bush's State of the Union, Children of the Movement Essays, and final essay(assignment given Wednesday, May 17)

English 1A: Response to Bayard Rustin, Ready for Revolution Essays

Research Essay: Planning sheet, outline, first draft, final draft

Presentations of research: Include an abstract or a short summary. Make copies for students

Extra Credit Assignments
Freewrites
Class Notes
Any last minute revisions: How many, What essay

Portfolio comments and grade
Course Grade

Your evaluation of course: Please be frank in your evaluation of teacher, methodology. texts, assignments, and anything else you'd care to comment on.

Ask any questions you might have for me about your writing or anything else.

Can I use any of your work in teacher research? I will let you know if anything is published and give you copies, and of course compensate you if I am paid.

My website: www.wandaspicks.com


Posted by englishcoa at 12:36 PM PDT
Updated: Wednesday, 17/05/2006 12:20 AM PDT
Tuesday, 09/05/2006
May 8-May 12
Greetings Students!

There are just two weeks left! Wow! Congratulations to those who made it! Remember, now is the time to begin assembling your assignments to see what grade you are planning to argue for in your portfolio. This week, I will show you examples of portfolios of other students, as well as, post a portfolio checklist so you can know what essay assignments you will need to include in this document due on the day of finals.

On the day of finals, you will also present your research essay. If you have chosen a topic shared with another classmate, you can present together. There are a few of you who have the same topic: Diane Howell, Cecil Williams, Maya Angelou, Bill Gates.

I thought it might be fun to have just one final meeting the week of finals, if we could find a date compatible in the F-Building where everyone could present at once over a 2-3 hour period.

The introduction to the portfolio asks students to think about the semester and what skills and/or knowledge have they gained which they plan to use in their lifelong pursuit of knowledge and education.

Essay 2 has students look at the writing process and discuss their own writing process: the topics chosen, the information used, revision strategies, writing as a process. This should include a definition of the difference between editing and revising and a value statement on the place for both in composition.

I am really interested in discourse about audience and how that shapes or determines how the writer approaches her topic.

I am also interested in discussion of the revision process, and whether or not seeing writing as a work in progress or a draft, liberates or stagnates the creative process. (Students are to use examples from their writing to illustrate these points.)

I'd also like students to think about and gives at three specific ways how they have grown as writers and thinkers this semester.

We have had great discussions and peers review sessions in English 201 10-11 a.m. and English 1A 5-9 p.m. over the past week. Students have given great feedback and the essays are getting visibly better, especially students who have taken feedback, gone to the Writing Center, L-234, and gotten assistance before the next peer review, students like Roy, Angie, and Wanna.

All research essays have to have to have a signature and comments in response to specific questions (3) students develop, from a teacher in the Writing Center before submission this week.

Suggestions for questions: "Was the concluding paragraph a bit dull? Did the introduction take to long to present the thesis statement? Should I use another clarifying example or two?" Are there any grammatical errors which distract or confuse you? (WWT p.222)

Tailor your questions to fit your concerns about your paper.

Posted by englishcoa at 9:45 AM PDT
Tuesday, 25/04/2006
April 24-April 28
Staff development is Thursday, April 27; then on Friday, April 28, I will be away at a conference. Take this time to work on your first draft of the research essay. It is due, with reviews attached of teachers in the Writing Center, for English 201, Monday, May 1; second draft, Wednesday, May 3, final draft, with another teacher and/or peer review attached Wednesday, May 10.

English 1A, Tuesday/Thursday, your draft for peer review is due, Thursday, May 9. The final draft is due Thursday, May 11.

Wednesday class: Your first draft for peer review is due, Wednesday, April 26; second draft is due Wednesday, May 3. Final draft is due, Wednesday, May 10.

The Writing Center is in L-234; 748-2132. There are evening hours M-Th.

Posted by englishcoa at 2:25 PM PDT
Wednesday, 19/04/2006
It's time for the home stretch
Mood:  happy
I hope everyone had a relaxing Spring Recess. I was surprised to note, only three students posted their essays. Of the three, only one person identified herself. If you don't tell me who you are, I can't give you credit; also students were supposed to indicate what draft the paper was and the grade.

Get to it people: Love essay, Midterm, and CoM or RFR essays.

The research essay is due next week. The outline was due Thursday or Friday, April 27 or 28, but there is no school 4/27 and I am at a conference 4/28. Arrange to have a teacher critique your essay next week, sign it and then revise your essay with his or her comments in mind. I will not take essays that do not have a teacher/tutor's signature with comments.

Have the teacher or tutor look at your thesis, support, essay structure, coherence and logic. This draft is due, Monday or Tuesday, May 1 or 2.

It's your responsibility to keep up with dates. If one slips by and the assignment is not in, your grade suffers.


I will not take any research essays past the due date, so plan accordingly. One student in English 201 has completed his essay. I will ask him to post it after I read and grade it.

For the rest of the semester, English 201 will focus on completing the rest of WWT and CoM. We will apply some of the strategies learned in WWT in essays from CoM.

English 1A: we will practice creating and defending arguments; and perhaps look further at reasonable or rational thinking. Also, students will be encouraged to polish their skills where weak so they are prepared for further adventures.

The portfolio checklist is coming soon. I'm still working on the cyber-version of this. I'll keep you posted.

If you have any questions ask them, please, then look here for my response.


Posted by englishcoa at 4:14 PM PDT
Updated: Wednesday, 19/04/2006 4:32 PM PDT
Sunday, 02/04/2006
Teacher Favorites
You are such great writers that sometimes I ask for copies of work. Please post those essays here. Again indicate the assignment, date of assignment, and the grade history, which means what you did specifically to boost the grade.

If any of you have missed a lot of assignments, you can still pass the course. Come see me at my office hours, between classes MWF -- 12-1 p.m., or call me (510) 748-2131 and/or e-mail me wanda_sabir@yahoo.com.

Thanks!

Posted by englishcoa at 11:17 AM PST
Updated: Sunday, 02/04/2006 11:35 AM PST
Civil Rights Movement, Ready for Revolution, etc.
Post your Children of the Movement Essays here English 201 students, along with your earlier essays written in January defining the Civil Rights Movement.

English 1A students, post your Ready for Revolution essays here, along with your Steele essay, and your response to the Bayard Rustin film.

I will respond to essays with a grade, if the essay is a revision. Please indicate your grade on these essays and what draft it is.

Posted by englishcoa at 11:16 AM PST
Love Essays Posted
Post your revised love papers at this link by Friday, April 7. If this is a revision, post both drafts, so I can see what happened to the essay and assign a new grade. If this is the first draft, state at the end of the essay or at the beginning: I received a 4, 5, 6 etc., on this essay.

English 1A essays will be mixed in with English 201. Make certain you indicate the class.

Posted by englishcoa at 11:11 AM PST
Midterm Essays Posted by April 10
Post your revised midterm essays here. I will respond with a grade for each essay. Remember this class is an exercise in argument. Your essays are the proof or evidence required for the grade you say you earned in your portfolio -- no essays, no evidence.

Posted by englishcoa at 11:05 AM PST
April 3-7: Happy Spring!
It's been a couple of weeks since I checked in with folks. Hope you're surviving the semester now that spring is here, and have taken advantage of the rain -- collected in puddles along the rear of the campus...the fertile earth your feet sink into as you run across campus and the friendly geese who continue to fertilize the grasses.

We've been looking at argumentation. I showed a film on the topic and we've completed the chapter in Diana Hacker's Rules for Writers on Argument, completed and graded the exercises at the end of the chapter where students are asked to name the fallacious arguments.

The most common fallacies are: either/or p. 362, argument with missing claim p. 362, non-sequitar p. 363, untrue premise p. 363, false analogy p. 360, false cause and effect or post hoc, ergo proter hoc p. 360-1, biased language, language which is carries mostly negative connotations not based on fact p. 359,365, which includes a lot of things such as: hasty generalization p. 359, stereotypes p. 359, ad hominem where the person is attacked the argument p.365, transfer p. 365, bandwagon, and red herring p. 365. If you don't have Hacker, I copied this section for students. Ask me for a copy.

We watched a film by Jean Kilbourne called Killing Us Softly, a short video which looked at how sexuality, namely that of women and girls is used to sell products and its subtle influence on the way women and girls are perceived in American society.

This was accompanied by a essay: Propaganda Techniques by Barbara McClintock, which students were to read and notice the similarities between the propaganda techniques and the logic fallacies both material and formal, that is flaws in the way words are used --inductive reasoning and flaws in the form -- the major, minor or conclusion or deductive argument.

Students were to answer all the questions at the end of the McClintock essay, then choose one of the five writing assignments and respond in 250 words by Friday, March 31.

The initial planning sheet was due weeks ago, so Hacker: pp. 370-373 should be review. I have returned all of the IPS, I received.

Homework for March 29 and March 31 was to complete the bibliography and bring to class on Monday to share. See Hacker pp. 396-400.

Complete the schedule on page 370 also, and read pp. 370-395. You should be sleeping with this chapter under your pillow. If you do not own Hacker, go to the library borrow the book from the reference section and copy the chapter then put it under your pillow after you read it.

Go to the website for Hacker where indicated and practice: 373, 380, 386, 395, 402, 403, 406, 422, 432, 447. Also, use the College of Alameda website "library" for assistance on managing information, search engines and how to avoid plagiarism.

I posited the claim that all conflict was the result of miscommunication. We had just finished watching Brandy's video about two guys who wanted one girl, her choices and the guys' disagreement.

We defined the words "objective" and "disinterested" and came to the conclusion that to be objective one had to be interested and care about the outcome of whatever was being discussed.

I maintained that none of us is truly objective and knowing this helps us achieve a greater sense of objectivity because we are aware of the limited vision our rose-colored-glasses afford us... a.k.a. baggage: the experiences we've had which prejudice us, often unconsciously, towards the issue at hand.

Our innate biases, once recognized, help us move from a bigoted state to simply a place of "not knowing." How does the saying go? When one knows better one does better.

We can only hope the baggage will get lighter as more light comes in and our eyes see farther and more clearly despite the glasses which according to philosopher Emmanuel Kant we can't remove. Therein lies the handicap, if you believe his theory.

Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday this week we will have conferences, so bring in all your papers so we can talk about your work and how you can earn the grade you desire. Briefly, deep profound discussions which tackle complex ideas with acuity and grace will receive As. Such a paper shows the writer's expertise in handling her topic. The paper is structurally sound and is not ambiguous. See Clarity p. 83 in Hacker. Such papers do not have to be perfect, but they should be void of simple grammatical and errors such as: run-on sentences, sentence fragments, verb tense problems, subject-verb agreement problems, missing words, wrong words.There should be no structural errors. See Hacker: The Writing Process.

Bring your questions to the conference. You know how I feel about Cs. If you've done your best, a C grade is nothing to be ashamed of. C- is not a passing grade, so if your work is getting 3/4s then you should be worried. Passing grades are 4,5,6s.

For English 201 we have read and completed the Narrative, Description, Examples essays. We are in Chapter 4 now and your Process Essay will be due April 17 -- you can write it that day and turn it in Wednesday, April 19. It should be at least 500 words. We have read Corn Bread with Character, 12 Steps to Quit Smoking, How to Make a House Look Good in a Hurry.

Homework for April 5: How to Write a Personal Letter p. 143.

Children of the Movement: We completed The Next Generation. Students were to answer the questions posed in the assignment sheet for Julie Guyot and Andrew "Bo" Young III. This 500 word essay was due last week: March 26, 29 or 31.

Children of the Segregationists
: Essay 1 pp. 119-130, was assigned. Please read it and the next essay on Ouida Barnett Atkins pp. 131-142 by April 19. For each essay write a brief summary of about 250 words. The summary is an essay not a paragraph.

Final Exam for English 201
Your final will look at the Civil Rights Movement from three perspectives: an academic scholar who put the movement in perspective, a parent whose child was profiled in CoM, a child of a CR Veteran. The question I want your paper to answer is, Where do we go from here?

Look at current pending legislation such as: the federal immigration bill being considered, the legislation passed which makes abortion illegal in the state of Denver?... etc., to couch your critique or analysis of the Civil Rights Movement, Black Power Movement, Segregationist Movement, and other movements then and now.

Films in English 1A
We watched the films: Shakespeare behind Bars in English 1A. The film look at the issue of rehabilitation, and the role theatre can and does play in the lives of the men profiled, many serving long sentences for violent crimes.

We explored the term in the Wednesday night class and used the class time to analysis the arguments the men posed to explain their thinking when they committed the crimes they were charged with. It is interesting to note, not one man spoke of wrongful conviction.

In the TTh English 1A class we also watch a film about DNA evidence used to exonerate innocent men who were serving terms for crimes they did not commit.

Earlier this semester we watched: King of the BINGO Game based on a short story by Ralph Elison, and The Murder of Emmitt Till. Papers were assigned for the Till film that discussed the concept of "strong women."

In the TTh English 1A we watched a film on Civil Rights activist Bayard Rustin and responded to the film in essays discussing the debate Rustin had with Malcolm X or other essays posted at pbs.org.

Final Exam in English 1A
English 1A students will look at a big topic such as: war, prison, public education, poverty, electoral politics, hunger, family, and discuss it from the point of view of an expert, a primary source or case study, and from personal experience. This will be 3 pages.

In Dreams and Inward Journeys: Owning Your Own Shadow, assigned 3/21; Henry Jekyll's Full Statement p. 393; Being Black and Feeling Blue p. 406 assigned the day of midterm; Ideologies of Madness p. 418, assigned March 30; Us and Them p. 427, assigned 4/18; I Like Guys p. 349, assigned 4/25; A New Vision of Masculinity p. 358, assigned 4/27.

Wednesday night class, proceed chronologically in the assignments listed.


Posted by englishcoa at 1:56 AM PST
Updated: Sunday, 02/04/2006 11:30 AM PST

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